Dylan and the Dream Pirates: WIP
Jun. 23rd, 2009 10:13 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Each tuesday, I plan to post a bit of Work In Progress to keep me going.
I have a friend that has the last name Foley. Not as close of a friend as he was years ago, but still a friend.
I should email him and ask him if he knows his last name is another word for pirate. I suspect he would like that.
Knox wormed through the window and followed the others as Travis Foley burst into the bedroom. Travis looked out the window, and yelled to his son. “Dylan! Don’t go it’s dangerous. I can help you.”
Dylan turned towards the window as they gained altitude. His father was furiously waving at him and gesturing for him to return to the apartment. Dylan closed his eyes and let the Lost Boys lift him to the sky.
“Foley? Your name is Foley?” Pip asked horrified.
“Does it matter right now?” Dylan asked.
Pip swallowed. “I suppose not, but Foley’s a pirate name.”
I have a friend that has the last name Foley. Not as close of a friend as he was years ago, but still a friend.
I should email him and ask him if he knows his last name is another word for pirate. I suspect he would like that.
Knox wormed through the window and followed the others as Travis Foley burst into the bedroom. Travis looked out the window, and yelled to his son. “Dylan! Don’t go it’s dangerous. I can help you.”
Dylan turned towards the window as they gained altitude. His father was furiously waving at him and gesturing for him to return to the apartment. Dylan closed his eyes and let the Lost Boys lift him to the sky.
“Foley? Your name is Foley?” Pip asked horrified.
“Does it matter right now?” Dylan asked.
Pip swallowed. “I suppose not, but Foley’s a pirate name.”
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Date: 2009-06-23 11:03 pm (UTC)I always love your writing :)
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Date: 2009-06-23 11:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-23 11:11 pm (UTC)Might be something to check when you're doing edits. I don't know if you always do it or if it's just this section. :P
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Date: 2009-06-23 11:29 pm (UTC)