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jasonandrewContinuing with my experiment about actively writing about my writing, I have passed through the first reading of Chapter Seven. It was titled the Worthy, but I dropped the "the".
To protect the uninterested....and there be spoilers here...
There is a fight in this chapter that surprised me. The nature and brutality of this fight felt weird reading it.
I think it needs to be there to set things on it's ear. War isn't fun. It hurts to be stabbed.
The character Olaf Gudrødsson is the leader of the Alfar and has to fight a monster to prove the group's worth.
Olaf Gudrødsson has thus far been kind of a dick, but a dick with good intentions. He has big brother syndrome, and always thinks he knows best.
It felt wrong to kill the character, but I suspect that was because I based my Camarilla gangrel character on this guy. I’m keeping it because of the changes it makes in the other characters.
Still, here’s me pour a metaphysical drink for one of my homies that feels like has just died.
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To protect the uninterested....and there be spoilers here...
There is a fight in this chapter that surprised me. The nature and brutality of this fight felt weird reading it.
I think it needs to be there to set things on it's ear. War isn't fun. It hurts to be stabbed.
The character Olaf Gudrødsson is the leader of the Alfar and has to fight a monster to prove the group's worth.
Olaf Gudrødsson has thus far been kind of a dick, but a dick with good intentions. He has big brother syndrome, and always thinks he knows best.
It felt wrong to kill the character, but I suspect that was because I based my Camarilla gangrel character on this guy. I’m keeping it because of the changes it makes in the other characters.
Still, here’s me pour a metaphysical drink for one of my homies that feels like has just died.
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