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[jasonandrew]

I am glad I was given a couple extra days for "Unto the Breach."

I really like the opening. I've never been in the military, but I tried to really capture the moment of living in those trenches during World War II.

Comments

[steve-vernon.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. You might try the trenches of World War 1, rather than World War II - which was a hell of a lot more mobile an affair.

[highway-west.livejournal.com]

Typo! I actually set it WWI, the War to End All Wars. ;)

[steve-vernon.livejournal.com]

Ha! Good to know. These days, a lot of younger folk can't always differentiate between the two world wars and I was afraid you were in the middle of a terrifying mistake.

God bless the typo...