Review of Chapter Eight, The Highway West

I am taking a long time with this chapter. If this bookwas an essay, this chapter would be the thesis statement.

This chapter is part lecture and part psychic awakening. This is where the rules of magic are discussed and also why we read such stories. This is very much a meta-chapter dealing with a lot of things I've thought about for a while.

It is very slow to edit. I want everything just right.

I will never again base a character on my friend Mario. This character like my friend Mario talks a lot. A lot. Good read, not so easy to write.

Review of Chapter Eight, The Highway West

I am taking a long time with this chapter. If this bookwas an essay, this chapter would be the thesis statement.

This chapter is part lecture and part psychic awakening. This is where the rules of magic are discussed and also why we read such stories. This is very much a meta-chapter dealing with a lot of things I've thought about for a while.

It is very slow to edit. I want everything just right.

I will never again base a character on my friend Mario. This character like my friend Mario talks a lot. A lot. Good read, not so easy to write.