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Aug. 17th, 2009
Dylan and the Dream Pirates: Editing
Aug. 17th, 2009 04:30 pmI started some edits on the draft today based on feedback from ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
insatia.
She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.
insatia.She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.
Dylan and the Dream Pirates: Editing
Aug. 17th, 2009 04:30 pmI started some edits on the draft today based on feedback from insatia.
She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.
insatia.She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.