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jasonandrew) wrote2009-08-17 04:30 pm
jasonandrew) wrote2009-08-17 04:30 pm
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Dylan and the Dream Pirates: Editing
I started some edits on the draft today based on feedback from ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
insatia.
She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.
insatia.She wrote a very nice dedication in the beginning that made me feel very good about the writing.
She has made some suggestions that I am mulling over.
The idea of switching the Queen of Cats from being calico to a Siamese cat. There something about this idea that kind of tickles me.
She's happy with the names of the characters, and indeed, she helped me name some of them. Note: She did not, despite her memory invent the name Spoken, but she did help name a lot of the other characters.
However, she thinks that one or two of the concepts need a more specific name. I'm doing a bit of research. I like one of her suggestions a lot.
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I tried to be creative on them.