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[jasonandrew]

I am glad I was given a couple extra days for "Unto the Breach."

I really like the opening. I've never been in the military, but I tried to really capture the moment of living in those trenches during World War II.

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[steve-vernon.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. You might try the trenches of World War 1, rather than World War II - which was a hell of a lot more mobile an affair.