Dylan and the Dream Pirates: The End is Near

[jasonandrew]

56,000 / 70,000 (80.0%)

Comments

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

Jerica wants to be a beta. She keeps asking if you have finished yet. I made her give me back my pages! If I am really good, can I ask to be a beta for D & DP?


I am so excited you are rounding the corner.

[highway-west.livejournal.com]

heh! I'll put Jerica on the list when I get the feedback from her. Maybe that will crack the whip for her. :)

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

She said she tired. My dear 15 year old said that every time she started all she could think of was that she kept forgetting it wasn't a book and that she got lost in it. I will be able to engage her more before you finish...well maybe. 80% maybe not speedy.

[(Anonymous)]

That's ok. :)

If nothing else, she provided a solid ego boost. :)

[highway-west.livejournal.com]

If nothing else, it provided a good ego boost. :)

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

Nice icon.

[highway-west.livejournal.com]

If nothing else, see if she'll answer the following questions

1. What were your favorite characters?

2. What were your least favorite characters?

3. Which parts of the plot were exciting?

4. Which parts were boring?

5. Was there anything you didn't understand?

6. What was your favorite scene? Least favorite scene?

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

That would be tried not tired. I will definitely do that. That may even be the best approach yet. Thank you. Thank you thank you.

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

She will be back at my house not this weekend but the next.