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jasonandrew) wrote2006-10-13 10:29 am
jasonandrew) wrote2006-10-13 10:29 am
Abigail's Dragon
Last night, I reviewed Abigail's Dragon for story content and make a list of areas I needed to adjust.
Things to do:
1. Review three fight scenes. [Fight scenes are the most difficult to capture and have be interesting. I think I managed to do well, but I think they need to be polished.]
2. Add High Tea with Harringtons scene. This will show more family support for Abigail and give the audience a bit more time to grieve with her..
2. David and Abigail scene. I think there needs to be a father/daughter scene.
3. Clara and Abigail bonding scene. This is a relationship I need to strengthen and I think I need one more scene in there.
Things to do:
1. Review three fight scenes. [Fight scenes are the most difficult to capture and have be interesting. I think I managed to do well, but I think they need to be polished.]
2. Add High Tea with Harringtons scene. This will show more family support for Abigail and give the audience a bit more time to grieve with her..
2. David and Abigail scene. I think there needs to be a father/daughter scene.
3. Clara and Abigail bonding scene. This is a relationship I need to strengthen and I think I need one more scene in there.