Dylan and the Dream Pirates

[jasonandrew]

I have finally really started to edit Dylan and the Dream Pirates.

My goal is quite simple. Edit one chapter a week. Go over each word until it is perfect.

I am happy with the details and the flow of the story for Chapter One: The Problems with Pirates.

My goal now is to improve the text. Make the words really pop. When I slow down to enjoy the journey, the experience is magic.

Comments

[sasjhwa.livejournal.com]

I am really looking forward to reading that story someday. :D

[highway-west.livejournal.com]

I realized that showing your stories before you are done with it. However, I will need test readers before long.

[sasjhwa.livejournal.com]

Let me know when the time comes. I'll see if I'm up for it. :D