DREAMS IN A DRAGON'S HOUSE feedback

[jasonandrew]

I finally recieved feedback on my DREAMS IN A DRAGON'S HOUSE query.

I'm told at 73,000 words, it is a bit long for standard YA. By adding 7,000 words, DREAMS IN A DRAGON'S HOUSE could be marketed as urban fantasy. That is something to seriously consider. I think I know of two scenes that could be extended to make it to that point, but I was worried about going over the word count for YA.

I obviously have a little more work to do on this.

Comments

[sasjhwa.livejournal.com]

Perhaps you could add those 7K words and offer them as an option, having both the short and the extended versions available for review.